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Notice by ~disturbedchicken:icondisturbedchicken:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I'm this ridiculous shell
So laugh at me
Fill me up with your mocking words
Until I
BURST

I might snap, go mad
maybe just settle with a small sigh
To express my destruction
But you probably won't notice
anyway

I'm this impossible mess
Locked up behind 'oh wells'
and stupid laughter
To cover up my lonely self
I'll decorate myself in foolish smiles
Like shells on a castle
Waiting for the tide
To drip in

And break me

I'm this enclosed disaster
You won't even hear it when I explode
Implode
Upon myself
Destroy myself, without a single breath escaping
Me

I might cry
But you'll just smile
And laugh
Ignore me
And not ever
never
not once

Notice me

I'm so lonely
©2009 ~disturbedchicken
:icondisturbedchicken:

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:iconguitarsapir:
Mood: Compassion ~GuitarSapir May 20, 2009, 2:42:25 PM
Great poem!!! :heart:
:hug: :hug:

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:heart: To the world, you are just one person. But to one person, you are the world :heart:
:icondisturbedchicken:
~disturbedchicken May 21, 2009, 6:49:49 AM
thank you ^_^

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as far as i'm concerned, you could say "the potatoes have boiled over" and it would sound romantic to me.." :heart: lol

i love you so much! :heart: :heart: :heart: :smooch:
:iconguitarsapir:
Mood: Joy ~GuitarSapir May 21, 2009, 7:02:18 AM
you're welcome!! :heart:

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:heart: To the world, you are just one person. But to one person, you are the world :heart:
:iconwhereismyicecream:
~WhereIsMyIcecream May 21, 2009, 10:58:14 AM
this one is awesome :O
i seems right from the heart

(everything is alright between u n tom right? :D)

anyway i love this one!
it's so tearfully, i think i'll fave this one if u don't mind^^
:hug:

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in the stairway of live, you'd best take the elevator

To be or not to be -- Shakespeare
To do is to be -- Nietzsche
To be is to do -- Sartre
Do be do be do -- Sinatra

living your life is a task so difficult, it has never been attempted before
:icondisturbedchicken:
~disturbedchicken May 24, 2009, 7:17:41 AM
oh it's not about tom, don't worry :)
thanks very much ^_^

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as far as i'm concerned, you could say "the potatoes have boiled over" and it would sound romantic to me.." :heart: lol

i love you so much! :heart: :heart: :heart: :smooch:
:iconwhereismyicecream:
~WhereIsMyIcecream Jun 2, 2009, 12:52:09 AM
u're welcome :P
jus kidding ^^
well just came back from spain, barcelona, so sorry for the late reply :s
:heart:

--
in the stairway of live, you'd best take the elevator

To be or not to be -- Shakespeare
To do is to be -- Nietzsche
To be is to do -- Sartre
Do be do be do -- Sinatra

living your life is a task so difficult, it has never been attempted before
:icondisturbedchicken:
~disturbedchicken Jun 3, 2009, 1:08:17 PM
ooh how was it?
we're going to france in july, so we get hot weather too :D

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as far as i'm concerned, you could say "the potatoes have boiled over" and it would sound romantic to me.." :heart: lol

i love you so much! :heart: :heart: :heart: :smooch:
:iconwhereismyicecream:
~WhereIsMyIcecream Jun 9, 2009, 6:27:19 AM
great^^
well we had a prety pathetic hotel...:s
but except for that it was amazing^^
might upload some photographs these days but i still havce to sort them out a bit :D

u speak a bit french then?
enjoy!
:heart:

--
in the stairway of live, you'd best take the elevator

To be or not to be -- Shakespeare
To do is to be -- Nietzsche
To be is to do -- Sartre
Do be do be do -- Sinatra

living your life is a task so difficult, it has never been attempted before
:icondisturbedchicken:
~disturbedchicken Jun 9, 2009, 11:52:00 AM
if anyone knows the lie of "I'll upload it soon I swear!" it's me lol

Yeah a bit - less than I did last time I went (last year), cause I've been out of practice. I'm sure I'll pick it up again, I'm the translator for my family when my sister isnt there lol so I have to :D :hug:

--
as far as i'm concerned, you could say "the potatoes have boiled over" and it would sound romantic to me.." :heart: lol

i love you so much! :heart: :heart: :heart: :smooch:
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